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Too much emphasis is placed on education for young people. Some people believe that governments should spend more money on leisure activities for the youth instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this belief?

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Too much emphasis is placed on education for young people. Some people believe that governments should spend more money on leisure activities for the youth instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this belief?

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Introduction

It is widely argued that the government should take the leisure activities of teenagers into consideration, not only to focus on developing the education system. However, I do not agree with this view because of the following arguments.

Body

Entertainment activities of the youth should be the responsibilities of each person and their family. Individuals have a wide range of different leisure pursuits so that the common entertainment system may not satisfy all hobbies and interests of youngsters equally and properly. It would be advisable for parents to guide their children in interesting pursuits as they possess a deeper (=profounder) understanding of their children than the government does. Parents can engage and help children identify which activities are useful and interesting for children to do in their leisure time.

Investing in education is advantageous and should be prioritized due to the consequent benefits. An advanced curriculum develops a high-quality foundation for children through superior lectures and activities for students at schools. Moreover, implementing innovative learning approaches and building a positive learning environment may not only alleviate pressure that learners are under but also foster an acquisitive mind in each student. A typical instance is when students can approach core knowledge through practical activities that are designed strategically not only through boring theory lessons they might be willing to examine their lesson and be cultivated interest in their subjects . Improving education ensures that children can access a wealth of knowledge equitably and comprehensively; thereby, creating a high-quality and abundant workforce to develop the country.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the authorities should concentrate on developing education rather than youngsters’ leisure pursuits.

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