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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

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The given line graph illustrates the figure for international tourists visit to the United Kingdom for three different purposes from 1989 to 2009. Overall, it could be seen that the number of visitors rose sharply throughout period. Holiday’s share had the highest number among three categories, although witnessed a substantial plummet and business was overtaken its position from 2004 to 2007, it still remained its status by the end of the period. In 1989, Holiday purpose hold the highest number of foreign visitors came to the UK, accounting for roughly 6.5 million visitors, followed by its rose sharply and reach a peak at 9 million people came to the UK by 2014. The figure then plummeted markedly to 6.5 millions in 2004, losing its position and overtaking by business. This trend suddenly witnessed a significant increase to 9 million visitors, taking back its status as the highest arrivals came to the UK, similar to the figure in 2014. Regarding Business , Meeting friends and relatives groups, it could be seen that the former had the higher number of visitors than the latter at 5 millions and just only 3.5 millions, respectively, in 1989. Business purpose witnessed a downward tendency, meeting the figure for meeting friends and family reunions at 4 million visitors by 1994. Throughout the period, both groups rocket noticeably to 7 and 6 millions of visitors by the end of the period.

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