The line graph illustrates the number of attendees categorized into five main activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia over 20-year period starting from 2000. It is noticeable that that of table tennis, and musical performance experienced an upward trend, whereas that of amateur dramatics witnessed a downturn trend. Additionally, there was a fluctuation in film club and martial arts. From 2000 to 2010, the number of participants in table tennis rose steadily; however, in the next decade, this activity experienced a significant increase by more than 30 from 20 to nearly 55. 2005 saw dramatics acitivity peaked at nearly 30, while musical performance activity remained unchanged at zero. Meanwhile, musical performances activity grew steadily in the first five year, then remained at a moderate rise, and reached at 20 by the end of the period. In addition, there was a downturn trend in amateur dramatics activity which peaked at nearly 30 in 2005 before falling sharply by 20 from 2005 to 2020. Moreover, the number of participants in film club and material arts were both fluctuated over the same period.
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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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