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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Overall, the maps illustrate how the area has been modified since 2000. Overall, the area witnessed various transformations, most notably with the addition of a hotel, more public toilet services, a shopping area , a dock to accommodate the addition of a ship and eventually a swap position of fishing boats and private yachts. Meanwhile, some facilities like Main road and Car park have remained unchanged over the period. The most notable change is the construction of showers & toilets adjacent to the large car park and immediately to the east of the the former car park is location of Marina and Fishing boat that were reversed. In addition, an appearance of Cafés & shops has been erected beside to the south of the river bank. Furthermore, on the far side of a entertainment area from the north is the establishment of additional a dock to contain a ship. At the south-east of the map corner, the damaged castle has been demolished to make way for a new hotel. To improve accessibility, the network of road has been extend to provide access to the hotel. Eventually, the public beach adjacent to south of the new hotel has been modified into the private beach which meet the demand for hotel

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