The illustration depicts the process by which the aluminum drinks cans are recycled and turns into new cans. Overall, the entire procedure is cyclical and consists of eight distinct stages. It begins once the drinks cans are collected and continues until the new products are distributed to drinks machines, at which point the cycle starts again. At the first stage of the process, the waste drinks cans are accumulated from different resources. After being gathered, they are delivered to a recycling centre by truck. Moving to the next step, the old aluminium is melted down into a mixture. Following this, this liquid mixture is formed into new aluminum bar in the aluminium recycling plant. In the next stage, the bars are rolled into sheets from which the new cans are manufactured. Having been produced, the new products are transported to drinks machines, allowing them to re-enter the same loop, making the cycle continuous and self-sustaining.
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The diagram below show the stages in the recycling of aluminum drinks can. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below show the stages in the recycling of aluminum drinks can. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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