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In many countries the level of crimes is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

18/07/2026 10:05 6.0 skor

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In many countries the level of crimes is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

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Introduction

In contemporary society, it is seen that the number of criminals who committed a crime and the violence of crimes are significantly rising. While the level of crimes rate is increasing, I will explain the causes of rapid increase in crimes often related to financial hardship before presenting some potential solutions can be done about it in this essay.

Body

For the reasons of causing crimes, some crimes were committed by offenders which often directly related to money and greed. This is because almost criminals frequently feel greedy and jealous about what other people own that they can not have .Especially when these criminal usually come from low socioeconomic and have no parental supervision since they were young, making them become a juvenile offender with unstable mentality and will do illegally things such as robbing the bank, burgling wealthy houses in oder to fend off these feelings. As a result, the huge number of criminals were teenagers who committed a crime which merely did it for fulfilling their human nature without caring about the outcomes.To address this obstacle, it is believed that the authorities and some educational systems are capable of collaborating together to hold a rehabilitation programs for vulnerable individuals. Besides, public workers should treat them with tenderness and respect as these offenders highly sensitive and use some encouragement activities namely assisting them with subsidies, helping them realize the consequences of their behavior through psychological therapies which can prevent them from reoffending. Moreover, using some security activities like conducting a weekly neighborhood patrols by the local polices in order to mitigate the risk of crimes and ensure the citizens safety.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while the risk of crimes rate and the violences of its are accelerating, I still strongly believe that this concern can be addressed by celebrating some support events and using security activity.

Skor Keseluruhan

6.0±0.5

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Skor Kriteria Writing

TR6.0
CC6.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Response6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:3
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:1
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:10

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