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＋In today’s world, some people assume that saving money for their future is an appropriate approach in their daily lives, while others argue that they may miss some marvelous opportunities to improve their future lives. I strongly believe that this approach brings about more advantages to people’s quality of life

On one hand, saving money during their daily live can support them in learning how to manage their money in the most effective way. For example, in my country Vietnam, most college students are struggling with their tuition and personal purposes. Therefore, this way not only can help them to better their financial budgets this problem easily but also reduce their stress and confusion. In addition, in Vietnamese culture, saving money can help them to overcome some urgent problems such as sickness or car accidents. Thanks to these saving resources many families have got over these difficulties quickly instead of waiting for other assistants.On the other hand, people may fail to improve their quality of life due to missing opportunities. For example, people choose to save up their money instead of spending money to travel abroad or taking part in extracurricular classes, which can broaden then perspectives and knowledge. Therefore, most people in the communities may lack of experiences and encounter many difficulties in their life.＋

To sum up, saving money clearly bring about more benefits such as managing their spending or overcoming some significant situations, while sometimes people may miss opportunities to improve their life. However, there is a wide range of opportunities in today’s world, so when we miss this opportunity we can still try others. I am convinced that saving money can primarily benefit our life.