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The diagram shows the process of making cherry jam.

18/07/2026 10:39 6.5 skor

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The diagram shows the process of making cherry jam.

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The diagram demonstrates the process of making cherry jam, a kind of sweet food. There are nine main stages in the process, starting with spreading a canvas on the ground and harvesting the cherries, and ending with putting labeling on the jars. First, a canvas is spread on the ground, and the cherry tree is shaken to harvest the cherries. After that, the harvested cherries are transported to the processing plant. Next, the leaves and twigs are removed. And the cherries are washed. In the following stage, the seeds are removed from the cherries using an automatic machine. Then, the cherries are cooked, and extra ingredients are added such as lemon juice, sugar, and pectin. They will check the quality of the jam. Last, the jam is put into jars. Finally, a label is stuck on the jars. And those are the steps to make cherry jam.

Skor Keseluruhan

6.5±0.5

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Skor Kriteria Writing

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR7.0
GRA6.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Lexical Resource7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0

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