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Today, more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing ability to communicate face to face. Do you extend to agree or disagree?

18/07/2026 10:56 6.5 skor

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Today, more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing ability to communicate face to face. Do you extend to agree or disagree?

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Introduction

In contemporary society, it is highly debatable whether individuals are losing ability to talk face to face. On a more personal level, I endorse this statement and I shall elaborate on my stance below.

Body

A persuasive argument behind my support is that with the development of technology, people would prefer chatting or calling through social media because of its convenient instead of directly communicating. Specifically, nowadays, most platforms are very modern, which can help people with the conversation. For example, 2 well-known applications: Zalo or Facebook have a special tools so that just only having the internet, they can chat or make a face video call regardless of how far others' living areas are which reduces a lot of time. As a result, people may not go out of their houses or workplaces to meet the person who they want to meet or talk.

Another justification that advocates might hinge on is that today, youngsters are access the techonogical devices very early such as computers or smartphones, thereby they do not have time spend time outdoor to meet people. Indeed, some children rely on social platforms too much instead of meeting or communicating with their peer groups. Moreover, most online games are uploaded in internet which make the young generation choose playing those applications and spend less time talk to real person. Therefore, those children may do not have a chance to learn communicating.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I am completely convinced of the proponents' viewpoints because of some smart applications on smartphones or computers have a lot of convenient tools which support people with calling and typing instead of taking face to face and those devices making youngsters addicted, thereby they may not want to talk face to face.

Skor Keseluruhan

6.5±0.5

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Skor Kriteria Writing

TR7.0
CC7.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Response7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:3
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:6

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