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The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the Biology School in a particular university and predict how it will be in the future plan. Overall, the university campus has many trees right now, which will be transformed into new functions in the future. Many new buildings are forecasted to appear for many purposes. Looking in the details, now, there is a curved road at the West of the Biology School space. It is easy to notice that a central building in the middle, placing on the left-hand site of the Drama centre. There are some function buildings locate in the south of the university campus, which are Teaching building, Cafe, Lecture room and IT centre. At the corner of South-East, an indoor sports hall is located, which is adjacent to many trees. Plants also appeared on the corner of North- West of the whole spot. In the future, trees will be demolished and only remained a few in the South. Lab and Office will be opened where plants are got rid of. The Indoor sports hall and the Central library still in the same places. The Drama centre is reformed into Music centre. Teaching buildings and lecture rooms are divided into two buildings. IT centre will become bigger. Trees in the South-East are replaced by car park for staffs in the future.

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