+Opinions are divided whether it is more achievable to maintain physical and mental well-being in rural areas or urban lifestyle offers more benefits to overall health. Although both views hold merit, I agree more with the former perspective.
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Some people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Some people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Admittedly, residing in modern citities may bring some health advantages that should not be overlooked. First and foremost, with the high quality of life, everything become more convenient for citizens here. For example, the medical systems are well-developed with many hospitals were built in accessible location, consisting some which are equipped with cutting-edge technologies, this can be more affordable and effective than those in countryside. With this helpful hand of technology, people can be more careful for their fitness because it is more easy to get medical support because of the location; whereas rural areas are not supported with these amentities. Moreover, in term of mental care, there are uncountable number of place for recreation, such as movie theater, playground, supermarket and shopping mall, which are built everywhere. Everyone can easily be incentivized to spend their time playing and resting when these conveniences are around them. This not only improves the economic but also incentivizes individuals to recharge and relax after long working hours, which can help them to be more positive and working energetically at work. Eventually improving their mental and physical performances.
However, theses adavantages are far outweighed by the positive impacts of rural settlement. First, there is a huge difference between the atmosphere of crowed area and the one in countryside. The rapid lifestyle in cities make movement of everything become fast and busy in many ways, almost every actions require instant responses, which may take a toll to the physical body and cause disorder of anxiety and depression. Therefore, many individuals choose spacious and tranquil space like rural environment can act as an exit for their demanding and stressful days. Because of the slow pace of life in this area, everyone can be more freely to calmly react to anythings. Futhermore, when living in an natural area with lower pollution levels, it can significantly encourage them to live in harmony with nature.+ This not only protects the environment but also helps them to find their natural self, which is improtant for the progress of mental recovery. They can complete themselfs, be more honesty and find peace inside their heart, leading them to a relaxing life without any dangers of stress or anxiety.
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In conclusion, whereas the conveniences and well-structured system with many modern technologies in urban cities may improve health and working performance, I believe that rural area can offer people an way out of their busy life by its natural and quite space and slow lifestyle, this is more povital in health care.
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