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Recent years, films and computer games regarding violence are common. While some people think that these films and computer games do not have negative effects, I would side with those who agree that violent films and games negatively affect the community and should be banned.

There are valid reasons why films and computer games containing violence are not negative. A significant reason is that people think these films and games are a simple means of communication and entertainment. Therefore, these films and games may contribute to relieving stress after long hours of working. In addition, these kinds of films and games are an effective factor to improve the economy by attracting more people to play and purchase these games.＋ On the other hand, with the criminal rate becoming increasingly serious, I believe that violent games and films adversely affect the community and should be banned. To begin with, films and computer games regarding violence make young people obssessed with violent scenes. Therefore, they tend to imitate these actions, leading to violent crimes. As a result, the government may have to put more resources into the criminal field and not have enough time for other fields. For example, environmental degradation is a massive problem in several cities, and the authorities need to solve the criminal problems first. Furthermore, spending a great deal of time playing games negatively affect the academic performance of children in general. For instance, students cannot focus on learning, while they are thinking about violent actions.

＋In conclusion, films and computer games containing violence have several negative effects on society such as criminal rate and academic results of children, so they should be banned.