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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts provide data about a public library in Little Chalfont town. Overall, regarding the pie chart, it is apparent that adults in the age of 18 to 64 made up the largest proportion in 2016. Besides, the table showed that loans by both children and adult fiction category accounted for the largest percentage and the bar chart also recorded the highest point in total number of loans in this year. The data given by the table showed significant differences between loans by each category. The figures for children and adult fiction made up the largest with 38%, followed by the adult non-fiction group with 13% which was more than twice as much as the percentage of children's non-fiction (6%). The three remaining categories which were children's DVDs, young adults and adult audio books occupied almost the minimum with around 1% and 2%. For the pie chart, the adults group constituted just over a half in total members of the library with 51%, followed by children with 22%. While young adults and adults 65 and over reflected almost the same proportion with 15% and 12%, respectively. Concerning the bar chart, the figures for the total loans were all higher than 15.000 between 2016 and 2007. In the years 2007, 2008, 2009 and 2013, the number of loans were lower than 20.000. While the six remaining categories were relatively equal between 20.000 and 22.500.

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