The graphic illustrates the steps and apparatus involved in the production of carbonated waters. Overall, the procedure includes 5 stages, commencing with purification of raw water, followed by a series of processing procedures, ending at delivering final products, either in bottles or cans, to the supermarket. Regarding the initial steps, the process begin with the water cleaning, in which raw water is filtered and passed through water softener before being treated by some chemical substances in order to remove impurities. Subsequently, purified water is then pumped forward into the second step, where it undergoes in an electric heater. Following this stage, once the water is heated, it travels through cooling pipes, and carbon dioxide is introduced into the heated water, converting it into carbonated water. Examining the remaining stages, after successfully transforming heated water into carbonated water, it then goes to the mixing tank, where it is combined with colouring, syrup, and flavouring ingredients before passing through an additional filter phrase to remove all the remaining impurities. The procedure continues with the filtering and filling step, after it is carefully filled into either in bottles or cans. Ultimately, the final products are loaded into boxes, placed onto the delivery trucks, dispatched to the supermarket where they can be consumed.
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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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