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some people think news has no connection to people's lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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some people think news has no connection to people's lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Introduction

In this day and age, some people believe reading newspaper or watching news programmes is a waste of time because there is not any connections related to ordinary human's life. I disagree with this view and my reasons will be listed below.

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Firstly, newspapers and news programmes on television provide lots of neccessary information that plays a crucial role in people's life. To be more specific, individuals will not only gain some latest informtion about many aspects of their life such as economy, education or healthcare, which have heavy influence on people's lives but also help them to make a informed decisions for any purposes. Moreover, newspaper or news programmes may reise public awareness about changes in interest rate, which cause strong impacts for everyone, especially for huge bussiness. In addition, children will be provided various news about education, thus they can carefully create plans in the best way for their academy. For example, some huge bussinesses like VinGroup or Apple often analyse caefully about changes in interest rate through observation about political or economic trends before thay dicide to invest in producing a new products. Thus, they usually get impressive achivements.

Secondly, newspaper and news programmes are also a great chance for people to get newest information in different parts of the world. More specifically, modern sociey often has strong connections or profound relationships among several countries. Therefore, an important event in one country can heavily effect on other nation. By read newspaper and watch news in television, individuals will not only update vital information all over the world like global climate change, international conflicts or even world war, but also enhance people's abilities like logical thinking, critical thinking or analyse skills. For instance, Ameica is one of the most infuential country in the world, so whenever they have event or something important, people can update to know whether it can influence on their country or not.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I totally disagree with this view because news play an important in people's life and help them get knowledge abou the world as well as improve some essential skills such as logical thinking.

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