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The question of whether young people should be forced to study full time until at least 18 years old has sparked a heated debate. ＋While having full time eduaction has some genuine benefits, I believe that adolescents should not be required to study full time.

Admittedly, full time education can bring some benefits for the younger generation. This is because they are exposed to various subjects in their learning progress, leading to broadening their horizons and enhancing their deep knowledge. This means that they can get many opportunities to pursue higher education and career prospects, which, in turn, helps them have a better life in the long run. Moreover, it allows them to develop critical thinking and problem-solving skills. Through various subjects and valuable lessons from teachers, they can build a solid foundation to solve problems in real life, which helps them quickly adapt to challenges in the future.＋

However, I believe that they should not be required to have full time eduation. The reason is that many people want to pursue their own hobbies and full time education can be time-consuming for them, which can prevent them from developing desire skills. As a result, they can be fallen behind compared to their peers, causing self-deprecation and emotional issues in the future. Moreover, it can be a financial burden for many families. This is because many families have a modest income, which can restrict young people to continue full-time education. This leads to they have to learn in a vocational school, which allows them to earn a living at early ages and reduce educational fees. Therefore, they can have a better living condition compared to full-time education.

In conclusion, although full-time education has some genuine advantages, I believe that young people should not be forced to have it because it can restrict them from developing desire skills and cause a financial burden for many families.