The bar chart provides information on five different areas of France and the UK in 2010. Overall, it is clear that the UK spent more money on cars, books and cameras than the other, while France did so on the two categories, computers and perfume. This difference show that both these nations used automobiles, and the biggest gap in expenditure was recorded in Camera. In 2010, more money was spent by France on Cars, Books and Camera. On the former category, France just spent 400,000 pounds, whereas the UK spent about 50,000 more. For Books, the budget gap widened, but both countries expend less than on Cars, approximately 380,000 and 400,000 pounds. The biggest disparity of two nation is cameras’ areas. The expenditure of cameras in France amounted 150,000, nearly a half of this category in the UK. However, in two distinct areas: computers and perfume, France invested even more. Roughly 400,000 pounds was spent by France on computers. The UK closed behind at around 350,000 pounds.Government investment in perfume both lower than another figure just about 200,000 and 150,000 pounds.
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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
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