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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

18/07/2026 15:26 7.0 points

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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The images depict the changes that have taken place in an accommodation for students from the year 2010 and the present day. Overall, a student shelter involves numerous structural modifications, with an destruction of living room to make space for more bedrooms, while the kitchen, bathroom and the main entrance have remained intact throughout the two different periods. Regarding the top of the layout, the living room and a small part of the garden area have been demolished to make way for the expansion of the students' bedroom, with its quantity increasing significantly from one to three sections. Meanwhile, the garden has been expanded, parallel with the top wall of the house. The middle-bottom portions have experienced minor changes. The kitchen and the fourth student bedroom have occupied the right space of the accommodation, from top to bottom, in that turn over the two different periods. In addition, another separate bedroom has been located centrally on the left of the house, adjacent to a bathroom, both which have remained entirely untouched throughout the timeframe. At the bottom of the house, the space for hallway has bee shrunk to erect a new en-suite room, while the entrance has stayed unchanged in the left corner of this accommodation. Furthermore, there has been a conversion from a garden to a new carpark, providing parking facilities for students.

Overall Scores

7.0±0.5

Good

Writing Criteria Scores

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR7.0
GRA7.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Lexical Resource7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Grammar & Accuracy7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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