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Exercise 1:The plan below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

18/07/2026 15:28 6.0 points

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Exercise 1:The plan below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the changes of the school campus between 1985 and now. Overall, it is evident that the school experienced the alternation of the library to a learning resources centre and the shrinking of play fields, beside the addition of some new facilities such as pool, fitness centre. Furthermore, the car park is eliminated and the classroom updated. There have been several changes on the bottom of half maps. On the left side, the prominent area which was the largest playing field has been shrunk significantly, it can be seen that there have constructed new classrooms along with a pool, fitness centre. On the right side, the block of classrooms have been renovated to 2 storeys to 3 storeys. Turning to the remaining change in the top of the maps, as it can be observed the office remained unchanged in several years. By contrast, the library transformed into a learning resource centre which consisted of a computer room. On the west side, the car park has been demolished and the biggest one which had the base shape was rectangular in 1985 returned to a half of circle, at the same time the road was eliminated. Finally, the number of students increased significantly from 1500 to 2300 students.

Overall Scores

6.0±0.5

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Writing Criteria Scores

TA6.0
CC6.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Achievement6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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