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There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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Introduction

Nowadays, some individuals believe that the most important thing is the internet because all the questions can be asked on the internet. However i believe that if we don’t have inventions from humans then the internet will not exist.

Body

Initially, the internet was a useful tool for people in modern life because it helped humans explain all the questions but not entirely true. Additionally, the people can connect together by the network on the internet such as facebook, zalo, instagram or threads. At here, the many people can share the story intesting or the study documentation and improve communication skills by the conservations around the world. However in reality, the internet was invented by humans because we created a modern system so the residents can connect together. Followed by, the humans had many modern inventions such as the wheel, network system or electric car. On the surface, i believe that the people should focus on inventing the modern tool to develop their country and the world. Additionally, the people should appreciate the inventions in history, which help them improve from old inventions.

Conclusion

In conclusion, i think that people should focus on inventing new modern inventions instead of spending time on the internet, improving and expanding the knowledge for them and developing the skills such as critical thinking or database analysis.

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