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Nowadays, technology is being used more and more widely in the healthcare sector. In my opinion, this is a positive development because it makes improve treatment and diagnosis.

On the one hand, there are some disadvantages, chief among which is improved cost of healthcare. Hospitals need to invest a lot of money into buying and maintaining high-tech equipment and facilities. This brings about the rise in hospital fees. Moreover, the increasing cost of healthcare makes it less affordable, which gives rise to limited access of poor people to medical services. Equally important, doctors may become too dependent on technology. As a result, if machines fail or provide incorrect results, patients may receive the wrong diagnosis or treatment.

On the other hand, , I am convinced that this is a positive development due to its advantages. One major advantage is the increasing of treatment. Firstly, advancements in pharmaceutical technology can lead to better medicine. This leads to effectiveness of drugs against diseases. Furthermore, new tools are introduced to assist medical workers during treatment. For example, robots are used to support doctors during surgery. Secondly, they improve diagnosis of new machines, such as X-ray machine and MRI scanner can improve accuracy of diagnosis and provide clearer results. Moreover, doctors can choose the most suitable treatment method or medicine, which result in better care for patients.

In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages such as improved healthcare and people’s dependence on technology. I believe that the advantages, including increased treatment and diagnosis of new machine, outweigh them