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The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by their college, for three courses.

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The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by their college, for three courses.

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The presented table gives information about the “very good” feedback from freshmen to the materials at their college in economics, law and commerce. From an overall perspective, the commercial department received the best rating from the first-year students in all categories. It is also worth noting that teaching accounted for the highest figure in most disciplines in the table, with the exception of teaching. In terms of the pre-course information, commercial students reached an apogee at 95%, which outnumbered that of economics by about 3 to 5. However, teaching witnessed a contrasting pattern where the percentage of economic students was equivalent to commercial students’ in the previous benchmark . Specifically, the tutor also mirrored the similar tendency, albeit to varying degrees, with both figures over 90%. Meanwhile, the figure for law ranged between over 60% to below 80% in three surveyed groups. Commercial courses occupied the first position in printing and other resources with respective figures of 85% and 81%. By contrast, students in other courses showed less interest in these categories with the ratings of below 80%.

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TA6.0
CC7.0
LR6.0
GRA7.0
Task Achievement6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:1
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:2
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:5
Grammar & Accuracy7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0

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