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The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

18/07/2026 15:55 6.5 points

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The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of clothes from bamboo plants. Overall, the liner process consists of nine steps, starting with planting bamboo plants, and ending with the distribution and consumption of the final product. The process begins when bamboo plants are planted and harvested when they reach maturity, after that the harvested bamboo is split into strips. Subsequently, the bamboo strips undergo a pulverisation to make liquid pulp, which is followed by a filtration stage, where the long fibres are separated from the liquid. The next stage, the filtered fibres are softened by adding water and amine oxide, then the soften fibres are spun into yarn, which undergo the weaving process to make fabric. Finally, the finished fabric is used to manufacture various textile products as socks, shorts and T-shirts.

Overall Scores

6.5±0.5

Fair

Writing Criteria Scores

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR6.0
GRA7.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:1
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:1
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:1
Grammar & Accuracy7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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