The line graph illustrates how many patients visited four clinics of a hospital over a span of 6 years from 2010. Overall, it is clear that an upward trend was observed in most categories, particularly in Eye, Diabetic, Dental while the opposite was the case for Birth control. Additionally, It was also important to note that Eye recorded in the highest patient, whereas the lowest figures were seen in Dental. The number of patients with eye problem witnessed a significant increase over a 6-year period starting from 2010 and reached a peak of 500 patients. By contrast, the figure for Dental bottomed out at 50 in 2012 before rising again until 2016. Although diabetes accounted for the lowest share in 2010, it always rose gradually throughout the period. As a result, the proportion of patients with diabetes overtook those of dental problems. There was a slight fluctuation in the number of patients with birth control treatment. Specifically, it climbed moderately from 2010 to 2012 before declining dramatically over the following 2 years and then growing again in 2016.
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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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