The graph demonstrates the total waste that a recycling centre collected in period between 2011 and 2015, described in tons. Overall, paper was recognized as the highest amount of waste that the centre collected nearly all the period, while garden remained the lowest constantly. At the first glance, most of the waste that the recycling centre collected was paper, excluding 2013. In the remaining years, the amount of paper collected had always been higher than 50 tons and reached its highest amount at 70 tons in 2015. Glass ranked the second highest amount of waste and even surpassed paper in 2013, at 48 tons and yet reached the its peak amount in the period at 52 tons in 2015. Tins and garden waste were relatively less than paper and glass, constantly stayed at approximately 30 to 40 tons of waste. In 2012, both reached the lowest amount that the centre could collect, at 27 and 15 tons respectively. Showing the same pattern with paper and glass, both of these types of waste has their amount highest in 2015, with tins at 39 tons and garden at 35 tons.
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The chart below illustrates the amount of waste collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart below illustrates the amount of waste collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
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