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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? '

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? '

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Introduction

In recent years, it has been popular that people can purchase the similar products anywhere all over the world. From my perspective, I believe that this phenomenon is a beneficial development.

Body

To begin with, the obvious advantage is that buying the same products everywhere in the world can provide people with convenience. This is because if high-quality products are manufactured far from their nations, consumers can easily get access to these goods and enjoy this efficiency. Take smartphones as an example. In some countries, phones may be difficult to produce because of lack of technology and equipment. Therefore, importing these devices from other countries can provide inhabitants with the opportunity to choose the items which are suitable with them. Another merit of this phenomenon is that the same products can give people a sense of familiarity. For example, at Tet, when Vietnamese people who study abroad or work far from their countries purchase their traditional products such as banh chung , they may have the same bustling ambience as their nations. This items can recall their bonding exerience with their families and their interesting moments, which can help people get away from some metal problems such as homesickness and looniness. As a result, people can be encouraged to be more motivated to achieve the goals and successful career.

Conclusion

In conclusion, buying the same goods anywhere in the world has numerous good outcomes. It not only can make people more convenient to purchase and choose the items which suits them, but also help people who study or work in another country have a sense of familiarity.

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