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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates data from 3 types of visitor to the museum from 1997 to 2012. Overall, the total number of visitors fluctuated considerably during the period. However, while adult visitors made a significant disparity, museum officials recorded an extremely lower number of visitors under 15 and especially special exhibition visitors. Regarding the total number of guests, there was a remarkable variation. Precisely, although it plummeted during the first and the last 5 years of the period, the total number of visitors reached its peak at 525,200 people in 2007. From 1997, the number of adult visitors slightly increased in the first half decade, before making a surge to 400,500 visitors in the next 5 years. However, despite maintaining its dominance in the museum's customer files, adult guests declined to 380,000 from 2007 to 2012. On the other hand, during the period, tourists aged under 15 of the museum experienced an unpopularity. Specifically, commencing at 120,000 visitors in 1997, the number of childhood guests witnessed a fall to 82,300 in the next 15 years. Additionally, although the peculiar group increased moderately to 42,000 visitors in 2012, it is still the most scarce customer group with the museum.

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