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the plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012

18/07/2026 16:38 7.0 points

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the plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012

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The provided two maps illustrate the development of a small theater, comparing its layout from 2010 to 2012. In general, noticeable changes had been made to the theater's arrangement over the period. Notably, the main modifications involve the removal and the introduction of various facilities. Examining the details more closely, in 2010, the small theater was situated in a rectangular area with a protrusion at the top-left corner and a main door on the south side. In 2012, the storage in the northwestern corner had been moved to northeastern corner, providing room for a dressing room and showers. Additionally, the stage in the north had been expanded where the original dressing room was relocated. Turning to the remaining sections, the auditorium in the middle still stayed in the same place. Meanwhile, the admin office and the ticket office to the south had been moved to make way for a big restaurant with six seats. Finally, a corridor on the north had been added.

Overall Scores

7.0±0.5

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Writing Criteria Scores

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR7.0
GRA7.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:1
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:1
Lexical Resource7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Grammar & Accuracy7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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