The bar chart illustrates the proportion of joblessness people in the 15-24 age bracket with the total rates of unemployment in five different countries in Europe in 2005 Overall, it is clear that the proportion of unemployed people in aged 14-25 was higher in all five countries. In addition, the figures for Poland were the greatest in two categories while the lowest of those were Denmark Looking first at three first country had highest rates, Poland recorded the highest figure of the survey at approximatly 37%, compared to exact 15% of overall. The rates of joblessness of youth in Italy was the following at around 23% and the generall proportion accounted one-third of that. In Hungary, percentage of unemployed young people was 17% and 8% for the overall one. Turning to 2 others countries, the downward trend was countiously in Germany with 14% in 15-24-year-old people, but the overall rates were higher than that former. The figures for percentage of youth and total unemployment were 8% and 3%, respectively
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The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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