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The young are often taught that they can reach any goal if they work hard enough. ＋in this essay, i will the benefits and drawbacks of this message.

In the one hand, this trend has several positive affects when adult told that anything can achieve by children's hard-working. initially, youngers can recieve the strongly motivation to do their study or work and then improving their performation. for instance, the child usually try their best to reach their passions until they can do it without giving up halfway. therefore, children can practice thr patience effectively. furthermore, by understanding the advice, youngers make the mistakes become learning oppotunities. making a mistake is not a shame but it is an chance for children to recognise their own weaknesses and fix them better in the next time. as a result, they can not loss confidence when failing the exams or competitions.in the other hand, while this trend has its benefits, i believe that the negative impacts still exist in many places. first, the natural talent plays an important role. for example, in some field such as artists or singers, they need innate talents to drawing and singing in the profession ways. even with enough great effort, everyone reach the higher level. besides that, children also need parents supportive in the long-term because recognition from family is a motivator for them. moreover, the qualitified teacher, education conditions and financial influent children's success. it is understood that, two students both try hard but only one has a better teacher and better education facilities so the other often has lower chances to achieve their goals.＋

In conclusion, hard work increase children's chances of success but it is not agrued that they can get every goals, as the natural ability and other situations also infuence the final.