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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Introduction

It is argued that music is a great way to connect people with different cultures and ages. I strongly believe with this statement that are proven by several reasons in essay.

Body

Music is as a bridge between people in various cultures and ages together. Firstly, music help people feel not only relaxation after a busy day but also the intersection of cultures. Moreover, music is a good way to promote long-standing culture traditions, by there traditional cultures will be well-known wit people around the world. For example, nowadays many Vietnamese singers like Son Tung MTP, Hoa Minzy, composed songs about the cultural aspects of the nation. In addition, music in different nation is combined together to create a piece of music that blends various cultures. The MV "Coming my way" of Son Tung MTP who is one of the best singers in Vietnam has demonstrated that when cooperating with TYGA a rapper in USA.

Second, music helps decrease distance and generation gap within the family. People in whole family maybe have same favourite type of music, so they can spend free time to listen to music together. This also build the family bonds when nowadays, many songs are combined traditional and modern elements so these are suitable for all people in the family. In previous months, singer Kieu Anh has released the song " La ngoc canh vang" which is a example for the connection between the old and the young in contemporary music.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I complete agree with this view because music promotes long-standing, interference culture traditions and brings people of various ages together.

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