The bar chart illustrates the percentage of weekly income which was expended on daily life by families in a country in 1968 and in 2018. Overvall, it is clear that the spending on the leisure witnessed an upward trend, while the opposite was true for using money on the food in 2018. Additionally, the expenditure on the household goods remained unchanged in both 1968 and 2018. In 1968, the proportion of spending on the food reached the highest point of 35%. The number of allocation for the housing peaked at 10% and the clothing and footware were the same as. The percentage of the household goods, personal goods, and transport were about 8% of weekly income. The expenditure on the entertainment was less than 10% of weekly income. Moreover, the amount of spending on fuel and power hit the lowest point of about over little 5%. In 2018, the spending on the food decreased significantly to less than a quarter. The figue for paying out the leisure, housing, and transport were moderate increase of from 5% to 10%. The percentage of the expenditure on the personal goods, the fuel and power, and the clothing and footware were slight decline of about 3% to 5%.
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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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