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The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrations present how the school has developed since 1985. Overall, a school has witnessed various transformations, most notably with parking consolidation, building expansions, and new facility additions, along with a major increase in the student population. On the western side, major restructuring has occurred. In 1985, there were two separate car parks: a main rectangular one and a smaller one between the road and classrooms. These have been merged into a single semi-circular car park in the northern area. The original library has been replaced by a Learning Resources Centre with a computer room, while adjacent classrooms have been expanded. New recreational facilities including a pool and fitness centre have been constructed in the southwestern corner. Regarding the central and eastern areas, the internal road connecting the playing fields to the car park has been removed and replaced with trees. The classroom facilities have undergone substantial expansion, with the original two-storey block extended to three storeys. Additional classroom space has been constructed on land previously part of the playing fields. Consequently, while the playing fields remain at the southern end, their area has been considerably reduced to accommodate this development.

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