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The charts below show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

18/07/2026 17:36 6.5 points

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The charts below show the reasons for immigrants to and from a European country in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The two pie charts present the proportions of different reasons for people immigrating to and emigrating from a European country in 2009. Overall, it is clear that the reason for moving to be with relatives accounted the largest part in inward immigrants, while most reason of outward migration was for work purpose. Additionally, the lowest percentage of both charts was none reason. In terms of the outflow of migrants, definite job constituted the largest propotion at 38%, significant higher than the following category which was other reasons a 23%. Ranked third and fourth were joining relatives and finding jobs with 15% and 13%, respectively. Whereas the rate of people leaving for studying was only 7%, and the lowest was 4% for no reason Regarding to the migration into, it was family reunion that comprised the largest proportion with 25%, closely followed by job purpose at 23%. In addition, there were three categories had the same figure at 15% include studying purpose, other reasons and seeking emloyments. The percentage of none reasons was still the lowest at 7%

Overall Scores

6.5±0.5

Fair

Writing Criteria Scores

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:4
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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