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The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14- to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14- to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given two bar charts illustrate the proportion of 14 to 16 years old student studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages-French, German and Spanish. Overall, the data highlights a proportion of French language was consistently higher than remaining languages. The majority of girl studying a foreign language considerably more common. Focusing on the percentage of student studying a foreign language, the figures show a strong tendency towards the study new languages of girls was relatively general. The proportion constituting half of the female population, accounting for approximately 50% in 1984 before dropping at 40% in 2007. In addition, the proportion of male students studying a foreign language was relatively more stable than the girls. The percentage of male students studying a foreign language reached 30% in 1984 and declined slightly at 25% in 2007. Turning to the popular languages studied by students in 1984, the figures show a strong tendency towards French. French was the most popular language, with 50% of students studying it. In contrast, the proportion of student stuying German was negligible, accounting for 20%. The Spanish was considerably low, at 5%. Regarding the top three languages studied by student in 2007, the proportion of student studying French decline by half compared to 1984. Similar trend can be observed in German, the percentage of student studying this language was decrease to 15%. Notably, the Spanish was increased slightly at 10% in this year, this figure was two times higher than 1984.

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