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The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

18/07/2026 17:51 5.5 points

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The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Bài gốc The graph illustrates one European country's computer possession by household from 1997 to 2011. By a brief view, two computers accelerated dramatically, and a similar pattern, but to a smaller extent, was seen in three or more computers. Meanwhile, on a computer only remained unchanged and no computer witnessed a downward trend during fourteen-year period. Thus, the graph showed that technology's role becomes more and more significant in individuals' daily lives. It is noticeable that the percentage of not owning computer was the common between 1997 and 1999 due to high costs of electric devices at that time, which was accounted for approximately 47% of households until 1998. On the other hand, no computer was followed closely by the figure for owning one computer at nearly 45% and witness a slight decrease to about 44,5% in 1998. However, by 1999, the proportion of owning a computer only became more popular and rose to 46% and dominated the graph until 2011, while the figure for having no computer decreased by 27% from 1999 to 2011. A contrasting trend was seen in the figure for owning two computers and three or more computers as a result of growing demand in electric devices since more tasks required technology to be accomplished. In 1997, two computers represented a mere 10% of households, and three or more computers represented a zero. From 1997 to 1999, three or more computers remained being unchange and finally witnessed a slight increase in 1999 at approximately 2%. During the same period, the percentage ow owing two computers also increase, with their figures reaching 12%. However, from 1999 to 2010, two computers saw a significant increase, the figure for no computer and two computers were identical, both standing at nearly 25%. By 2011, the proportion of two computers came at a distant second at 28%, outpacing three or more computers by a margin of 18%.

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TA6.0
CC6.0
LR5.0
GRA6.0
Task Achievement6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Lexical Resource5.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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