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In the past, people usually lived in the same place for a long time. Nowadays, they tend to move to different places more frequently. What are the reasons for this?

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In the past, people usually lived in the same place for a long time. Nowadays, they tend to move to different places more frequently. What are the reasons for this?

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Introduction

Nowadays, in a fast-changing world, people frequently relocate, unlike in the past life when people lived in same or one place for a long time. Now, people have developed a trend of relocating living in many different places. Thereby causing considerable debate about living in one place for only a short period for place and residential mobility can either bring benefit for them or causes a serious drawbacks for their lives. In my view, this essay will explain why I believe this is a positive development.

Body

In the past, when technologies, internet, social media and job markets didn't yet expand. People were used to live a slow life that fewer changes and comfortable lifestyle. The past products was cheap, other part because of they can subsistence farming. thereby they didn't have to worried about income and daily expense. But, the modern life has a lot of change where the prices of goods are escalating day by day and labour market demand also rise over time. Furthermore, a wide range of payment such as house rent cost, price of water or electricity bills and if they are parents, they have to pay for their children's tuition fees. These living expenses put a burden on household income so the breadwinner had to have a stable job. Therefore, many people relocated other areas due to a new opportunities for their family.

The modern families often have a more open-minded attitude. This main reason creates a new trend which leave their previous lifestyle and in search of a better quality of life. These activities can bring a lot of benefits for families improve their lives. In fact, the new city where offers everything their needs such as modern amenities, healthcare facilities, public transport especially the stable jobs with high-paying jobs that help they can pay living costs. These jobs require highly skilled workers consequently worker have to adapt to the skilled workforce. Relocating can bring for them by creating a flexible work environment, allowing workers are exposure to technology advancements and develop interpersonal skills. Furthermore, their children can access to a high-quality education with a number of prestigious universities with specialised multidisciplinary courses, helping them develop scholastic aptitude and opening the door to a wide range of better career opportunities in the future. Last but not least, the residential mobility helps become acquainted with new neighbourhood and cross-cultural understanding especially this life can push them beyond their comfort zones.

Conclusion

In conclusion, migrating for better opportunities is entirely positive, and it is an appropriate solution for families who genuinely need a better opportunities to improve their lives. This can create a dream life for them, helping people acquire new knowledge and adopt positive values, allowing them to become better versions of themselves.

Skor Keseluruhan

6.0±0.5

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Skor Kriteria Writing

TR6.0
CC6.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Response6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:6
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:6
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:17

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