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The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table depicts the worldwide mobile phone sales in 2005 and 2006 Overall, Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson experienced an increase in their share of market with Nokia produced the most out of the company. Conversely, all the other companies, including Samsung, LG, BenQuil Mobile and others, decreased over the period. Nokia constituted at 32.5% market share of the total in 2005 before rising up to 35% by 2006, dominating all the other organisations in both years. In addition, both Motorola and Sony Ericsson surged over the years, accounting for 21.1% and 7.4% share of market in 2006 respectively. Regarding the others, Samsung and LG both decreased by only less than 1% of the total proportion. Additionally, other companies went down from 19.2% in 2005 to 16.2% by 2006, while BenQuil Mobile suffered the most out of all, losing half of their share of market in 2005.

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