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The graph below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010.

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The graph below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010.

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The given table compares the proportion of mature people in more modern and remote sections who joined in four leisure time exercise between 1990 and 2010. Generally, all of these underwent a growth trend. Just except animated play in cities and the playing field in rural maintained its percentage of adults. In contrast, animated play in countrysides and playing sections in urban areas felt minimally in this comparison. Particularly, reading in modern fields increased its proportion of a group of adults significantly from 61% to 78% in 10 years. Similarly, in remote areas this ration grew 7% from 71% in 1990. As a result, in 2000 they did not create a gap and stood at 78%. Photography activity witnessed a climb pattern too. In more modern sections , it rose gradually from 7% to 17% in this period. At the time, in the countrysides rocketed by from 14% reached 26% and overtook the urban’s percentage. It can be seen that animated play maintained its figure at 10% in cities. However, according to the data in rural areas the percentage of mature people dropped by 4% from 18% . Playing activity in modern sections declined from 21% to 14%. Meanwhile, the proportion of adults in rural maintained through 10 years at 26%.

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