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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

19/07/2026 01:15 7.5 skor

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

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Introduction

Opinions are divided whether fossil fuel should be completely altered by green energy such as wind and solar power. While phasing out fossil fuel may lead to economic at first, I believe that the advantages of absolutely replacing far outweigh its disadvantages.

Body

It is undeniable that carbon-based fuel plays a paramount role in economic growth. For example, the USA dominates the world market by controlling conventional fuel price. Therefore, If the governments deter individuals from consuming fossil fuel, it would lead to mass losses for the governments themselves. Some countries whose economies rely heavily on carbon-based fuels may undergo economic degradation due to phasing out fossil fuel. As a result, unemployment and crime rates may significantly increase.In contrast, while transitioning carbon-based fuel can lead to short-term economic loss, in the long run, the benefits far outweigh its disadvantages. This transition not only ensures energy security but also fosters sustainable economic growth, while mitigating environmental degradation. Green energy may create a new era. Millions of job opportunities in manufacturing and research can be generated stem from fresh fuel such as wind and solar energy, which can effectively offset the job losses in traditional fuel sectors. More importantly, using renewable energy is the only way to foster climate change mitigation. Unlike fossil fuel, green energy sources do not emit greenhouse gases , thereby combating global warming, reducing air pollution and protecting public health, which saves billions of dollars in health systems

Conclusion

In conclusion, although the complete shift from fossil fuel to green energy may trigger economic shocks and unemployment rate, it remains an inevitable move. In the long run, the immense benefits in term of environmental preservation and sustainable economic growth far outweigh its drawbacks

Skor Keseluruhan

7.5±0.5

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Skor Kriteria Writing

TR8.0
CC8.0
LR7.0
GRA7.0
Task Response8.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:2
Coherence & Cohesion8.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:1
Lexical Resource7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:2
Grammar & Accuracy7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:8

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