The given table illustrates the information about the proportion of unemployments in nine different nations from 1994 and 2004 Overall, it was obvious that Ireland's workforce had the highest rate of unemployment among the others country in first year, although this number then decreased significantly.An opposite case was Japan, with the smallest figure through out the period. In 1994, Ireland took the lead in the rate of unemployed individual at 14,8%, relatively exceeding that of Italy, Canada and the UK with 11,8%, 10,6% and 9,5%, respectively. These figure then followed a similar decreasing trend in 2004. The most substantial decline was Ireland to 4,4 %, and the second was the UK to 4,7%. Both the decreases in Italy and Canada was less remarkable, with the former being at 8,4% and the latter being at 7,7% in 2004. At the same time, the unemployment percentage in the USA also dropped slightly from 7,2% to 5,4 % in the period. Meanwhile , the pattern for Poland, Germany, Australia and Japan was completely converse. Poland encountered the significant increase in its unemployment rate, from 12,4% in 1994 to 19% in 2004. Whereas the situation for the remaining nations was quite better, with the figure for Germany from 7% to 9,4%. Both Australia and Japan numbers was minor, stooding at 5% and 2,7% and ending with 5,4% and 4,7%,respectively.
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Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of unemployed people in the total labour force across nine countries in 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of unemployed people in the total labour force across nine countries in 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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