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The picture show the changes in a self-study area of a language school in VietNam after 2 years

19/07/2026 05:52 5.0 skor

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The picture show the changes in a self-study area of a language school in VietNam after 2 years

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The map demonstrates the transformation that took place in a self-study area of a language school in Vietnam between 2016 and 2018. Overall, the study area has been significantly redeveloped over the period. In particular, the addition of new facilities and the removal of several rooms,replacing some private self-study rooms and create a new position. In the right area,a studio and cafeteria room was constructed, replacing 2 private self-study rooms and manager's office.Additionally,bulletin board area was added next to the cafeteria room opposite the entrance.In the entrance site, include "small shelves,teacher's desk,reception area" making a considerable adjustment during 2 years. Meanwhile,from the left space experienced minor modifications, the shelves zone was upgraded into more advanced, adding laptops and ipads besides that adress the position while the manager's office was removed on the left of bottom instead of the right. The most notable of which was the development of self-learning site,this adjustment modernized the layout to enhance the suitable study space for all students and teachers in school.

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