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The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010

19/07/2026 06:06 5.5 skor

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The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010

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The maps compare the layouts of a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010 Overall, this area had been commercialized and modernized. Specifically, the exhibition rooms were modified, some commercial facilities were added. The changes can witnessed in the primary campus. The exhibition room to the bottom left of this area was shrunk to make way for the expansion of the shop, which is embedded to the right of the exhibition room. Meanwhile, the exhibition room in the top right corner did not change in its size but its two parts were combined into one part. Additionally, the entrance and restaurant remained unchanged throughout the period. Regarding the surroundings, the biggest change is the transformation of the garden in the bottom right corner of the map to the large car park, which sketched next to the garden. The cottage under the main campus were replaced by a cafe, while the garden at the top and the main road at the bottom did not experience any changes.

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GRA6.0
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Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
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Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
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Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
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