The maps compare the layouts of a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010 Overall, this area had been commercialized and modernized. Specifically, the exhibition rooms were modified, some commercial facilities were added. The changes can be witnessed in the main building. The exhibition room to the bottom left of this area was reduced in size to make way for the expansion of the shop, which is next to the right of the exhibition room. Meanwhile, those in the top right corner maintained its size but its two parts were combined into one part. Additionally, the entrance and restaurant remained unchanged throughout the period. Regarding the surroundings, the biggest change is the convert of the garden in the bottom right corner of the map to the large car park, which streched from the northern garden to the southern main road next to the garden. The cottage below the easten exhibition room was replaced by a cafe, while the garden at the top and the main road at the bottom saw no modifications
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The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
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The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
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