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The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

19/07/2026 07:12 6.0 skor

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The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

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The maps demonstrate the transformation of small local museum over a fifty-year peroid. Overall, a small local museum has experienced renovate changes with the introduction of utility rooms and some structures were demolished and replaced. In 1957, there was a lot of trees around the museum also the road which had an entrance hall provide access to the museum. There was three rooms in the museum. The national history exhibition was adjacent to the local history room which was opposite to the museum store-room. In addition, a garden was located at the corner of the maps. But in 2007 witnessed a substantial developments in structures. Trees which was next to the road are chop down and turned into car park. The entrance halls is reduced to the entrance while the museum was expanded with six areas. The museum store-room is demolished then gived way to cafe. The museum shop which is constructed was connected to cafe by reception. The local history room was moved to the central areas. While the national history exhibition was widened to special exhibitons and education centre, the garden remain in its original position.

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