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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

19/07/2026 07:18 5.5 points

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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart describe the data in men who are 16-25 years old in the country between watching sport and joining in this. It is clear that while others figure have percentage of watching more than partcipating, there are people enjoy fishing more than watching it. Moreover, viewers interest in football most wheares the porportion of player in this sport was the least. The figure for watching football was the highest with over 45% wheares it has 10% people like play it. Comparing to rugby, the data of players is 20%, which is lower than wacther 10%. In addition, percentage of players is over 25% and data of people watching was higher than with around at 38%. It is noticeable that fishing is the only sport having the figure of doing than watching. It have the significant rate at 50%, which is as third as spectators at nearly 15%. Beside that, the proportion of viewers of horse riding and racing has the considerable number at over 40%. Its is as twice as the rate of players. Additionally, the figure for players in badminton is nearly people watch that, over 25% comparing to nearly 30%

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5.5±0.5

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Writing Criteria Scores

TA6.0
CC6.0
LR5.0
GRA5.0
Task Achievement6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:4
Lexical Resource5.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:3
Grammar & Accuracy5.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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