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Some people say that in today's world, private companies, rather than the government, pay for and conduct most scientific research. In spite of this trend having some advantages. personally, i believe this development has disadvantages.

As can be seen, this trend brings some positive points. Some big companies like Google, Apple or Tesla. They spend about tens of billions of dollars each year on reseach and development. This is far greater than budgets of many governments in the world, specially is small and developing countries. Such investment enables their to research on a vast scale, which makes these companies are breakthroughs. Before, scientist were limited career opportunities in university or state research institutes. Today, many companies like Google and Microsoft are hiring thousands of important positions with very high salaries. As a result, the field of science attracts many young talent, and make it a rare development.

However, I believe that disadvantages outweigh advantages. Especially, for increasing long time Many private companies decided research on profitability but skip some important problems because it not make a profit. As a result, rare diseases and tropical illnesses are affects to poor people who were neglected. this creates severe inequality, now sciences are serving for rich people, instead of humanity as a whole. when detecting some products have serious dangers, many companies hide the information because they scare. for Examples, vape companies are hiding cancer risks in many decade or oil companies covering up the climate change. the consequences are milions of deaths or sicks, because consume products from these companies＋

Inconclusion,in spite of model having some advantages, i thought that disadvantages outweight advantages because it make development are more slowly