The given chart illustrates sales of three catagories of magazines, there are fashion, music and sports in a region over five weeks. Overall, the amounts of sales of sports and music magazines surged significantly, while fashion increased steadily. Additionly, sports magazines reached a peak in week 5, wheares fashion hit the bottom in week 3. The figure for sales of sports magazines stood at around 75$ million in week 1, before soared sharply to about 110$ million in week 3. After that, this category decreased slightly to 100$ million in week 4 then recovering to 120$ million in week 5. Moreover, there was a rapid rise from 40$ million to 80$ million in music during 5 weeks. The amount of fashion sales started at around 35$ million in week 1 which was followed by a significant fall to 20$ million in week 3. Then, it rose triple to 60$ million in week 5.
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The chart below shows sales of three categories of magazines (fashion, music, and sports) in a particular region over five weeks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below shows sales of three categories of magazines (fashion, music, and sports) in a particular region over five weeks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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