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The table and the chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in 4 countries.

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The table and the chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in 4 countries.

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The table and the chart illustrate the total expense of studying abroad and the amount of money that students spend on three different sectors. Overall, the expenditure of pursuing education internationally in country A is the highest, while the opposite is true for that in country D. Moreover, the figure for money which is spent on tuition and living cost by pupils in nation A always higher than that in the other countries. Looking at the details, the expense of studying abroad in country A is the largest, at $875 , significantly higher than that in country B, which is only $735. Therefore, country A allocate their most money to tuition and living cost, which stand at $358 and $430, respectively, while the amount of money that students in country B spend on that is only $320 and $350, respectively. However, pupils in country B spend $280 on accommodation, which is $60 higher than that in country A. In contrast, the expenditure of studying abroad in country C and D always lower than the others, representing for $540 and %435, respectively. In general, the amount of money that students in country C spend on three different categories is higher than that in D. They allocate their highest money on living cost, at $275, which is $50 higher than that in nation D. Meanwhile, the pupils in country D spend their largest budget on tuition, which stand at $235, but it still $15 lower than that in C. Moreover, students in both country C and D spend their lowest money on accommodation, which stand at $240 and $200, respectively.

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