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＋There are those who think that competitive sport brings benefits to children’s education, while others think that it is not beneficial. This essay will closely examine both perspectives, but I am convinced that the negative effects are more significant.

On the one hand, competitive athletics can improve physical health and develop valuable life skills. First, this type of sport is high-intensity, requiring children to be continuously active, leading to the improvement of children’s fitness such as endurance, flexibility of body, intense concentration. Moreover, children are taught valuable skills from this type of sport, especially teamwork. Not only individual sports but also team sports need competitiveness, such as basketball, football. Therefore, to win, children are required to communicate with teammates and build bonds with their mates. As a result, children can learn less abstract about teamwork in sport than just theory.＋ Additionally, children can improve self-discipline, cultivate responsibility among other qualities.

On the other hand, negative effect from sports can make a child fall into crisis by different outcomes. First, peers, coaches and parents place considerable pressure on children. Peer pressure is very popular in the young age, specifically when putting comparisons about children in competitive sport. Moreover, the high expectation from parents and coaches can put children in pressure. As a result, negative mental issues like stress, anxiety, exhaustion and obsession increase considerably, which are overwhelming for a child. Furthermore, the risk of injuries from competitive athletics can rise at different level from minority to significant. This type of sport includes physical contact continuously at high intensity and at great speed. Consequently, injuries are caused mỏe easily than normal sport, which is very dangerous for those who are developing in bodies.

Upon weighing both views, I believe that the advantages are overshadowed by the disadvantages. ＋While competitive sport indirectly teaches and also improves children at physical and quality, the sport itself brings many other negative effects such as pressure or injuries to children.